Oakland County news: Pontiac

While I was browsing through the news in Oakland County, I read that a man in pontiac stabbed two people for walking through a neighbors yard. He stabbed a man that latter died, and a woman who survived. He stabbed both of them repeatedly after arguing with them about walking through his neighbors yard. He will be guilty of murder, and the police all agree to how ridiculous this was. He stabbed people who were walking through a yard that was not his.

Restaurant Review...again

So I wrote my essay and i was re-reading it and i realized that i suck at this whole detailed, sensory image stuff. Im just glad that i can get my girlfriend to help me because she is awsome at that stuff. But seriously my paper is lame so far. (Didn't know what to blog about)

Detroit Sports

I just herd that the Detroit Lions traded Dre Bly for Tatum Bell and on offensive lineman. I think that this is either going to be a really great or really bad move depending on the outcome of Kevin Jones' injury. Also the Detroit Tigers are back to their winning ways with their first pre-season win. Gary Sheffield hit a home run in his first game as a Tiger.

All said and done

My restaurant review went great. I had an awsome burger with curlie fries and a chocolate shake. The perfect 50's meal. My girlfriend had a more contemporary meal with a tuna fish sandwich and some potato salad. The whole restaurant was decorated with 50's memorabilia. These ranged from elvis to cadillacs to babe ruth tobacco. The floor was also a unique black and white tile; which is very reminescent of the 50's. And to top it all off the waitresses were dressed in the classic pink dresses that are very unique to the 50's. Our lunch for the two of us was around $17 dollars.

Restaurant Review

I believe that I will do my review on Don's of Traverse City. It is a small restaurant that looks like an old fashioned trailer. They have the whole 50's theme going on in the whole restaurant; not to mention the old fashioned food that tastes awsome. They are mainly known for their incredible ice cream shakes; one of these shakes has enough calories to last you a week. I plan to go their and review the restaurant on Monday.

Restaurant Review

I thought Jane Slaughter did a wonderful job in her restaurant review of Tango Bravo Argentine Grill. The way she described the foods, and still added the names as they appear on the menu was very good. She made me want to eat things that I have no idea what they are or look like. She choses her words very well and makes you mouth water, especially when you are hungry.

Plan for Community Member Essay

Here are my plans for revising my essay:

• Add some background information to the beginning of my essay.
• Fix some of my quotes so the reader knows who is saying them.
• Add some more visual details to the essay, along with the background information that I will be adding.
• Fix my reference citing. I did not know what format to do in the beginning.