All said and done

My restaurant review went great. I had an awsome burger with curlie fries and a chocolate shake. The perfect 50's meal. My girlfriend had a more contemporary meal with a tuna fish sandwich and some potato salad. The whole restaurant was decorated with 50's memorabilia. These ranged from elvis to cadillacs to babe ruth tobacco. The floor was also a unique black and white tile; which is very reminescent of the 50's. And to top it all off the waitresses were dressed in the classic pink dresses that are very unique to the 50's. Our lunch for the two of us was around $17 dollars.

Restaurant Review

I believe that I will do my review on Don's of Traverse City. It is a small restaurant that looks like an old fashioned trailer. They have the whole 50's theme going on in the whole restaurant; not to mention the old fashioned food that tastes awsome. They are mainly known for their incredible ice cream shakes; one of these shakes has enough calories to last you a week. I plan to go their and review the restaurant on Monday.

Restaurant Review

I thought Jane Slaughter did a wonderful job in her restaurant review of Tango Bravo Argentine Grill. The way she described the foods, and still added the names as they appear on the menu was very good. She made me want to eat things that I have no idea what they are or look like. She choses her words very well and makes you mouth water, especially when you are hungry.

Plan for Community Member Essay

Here are my plans for revising my essay:

• Add some background information to the beginning of my essay.
• Fix some of my quotes so the reader knows who is saying them.
• Add some more visual details to the essay, along with the background information that I will be adding.
• Fix my reference citing. I did not know what format to do in the beginning.

I Just Wanna Be Average

I did not understand a single part of this essay. I thought the title was very misleading; I had no connection between the title and the actual essay. This made it very hard to read since I was expecting something totally different. I still understood what was happening, but it all seemed so random. I did not understand why he was writing what he wrote. It seemed like there was no point to what he was writing about. It was just another story. In my opinion this was the worst reading so far in the class.

Damn!

WOW! I don't know how anybody could survive this. These two cars just get crushed by a semi with two trailers. I honestly think these are the luckiest people in the world. I don't understand why the car didn't just explode or something.

Lack of Online Material Again

For the second of two times I have run into a lack of online material. Don't worry I'll be fine because I managed to find exactly three sources. I would of sworn that there would of been a lot more online sources. They were all notes from city meetings; which made me very surprised that there werent any online newspaper articles about the petitions. Any way I just wish essay writing was a lot easier.